Stenhoff, a junior and football player at Child Visa High School in Redmond, California, cracked his vertebrae while slamming into the ball carrier's chest. He is not confined to a wheelchair.
Considering his injuries, Stenhoff is not bitter. "I knew the risks involved when I decided to play football," he says, and adds, "I wish I would have known just how bad it could be."
Each year, there are 20,000 injuries in high school football; Twelve percent of them permanently disable the victims, a thirty-five percent of the injuries are to the neck and head. Most critics blame the helmet.
You start off with a general overview type of lead, then refer to Stenhoff. To make this work as a focus story, start with Stenhoff, not with a preamble.
ReplyDelete* delete "unfortunately" (commentary, not news)
* Redmond, Calif.,
* He is now confined ... (but check AP Style on disabilities -- it'll tell you not to say it this way)
* 12 percent, 35 percent
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